Friday, 25 March 2016

Q6 improved rough draft

1 comment:

  1. Promising and very well organised and referencing appropriate examples.

    To improve add:

    1) Using an electronic blog: explain that presenting work electronically improved the organisation of may work under specific headings whilst also enabling my media tutor to give feedback very swiftly and consistently monitor my progress . This was also important in giving me opportunities to improve your analysis and research skills:

    Then Harriet upload an example of a tutor comment on a case study to support your point.

    2) Memory card for capturing footage on premiere pro or for saving course work.

    3) Adobe Premiere: You need another heading then you could explain what tools you used to achieve specific editing transitions, changes in colouration adding sound track. Provide evidence with screen shots from your film.


    Excellently organised and well expressed. At present strong Level 3+ Grade B+ : With additions Level 4

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