Well done for researching problems with cyber bullying this greatly strengthens your response.
Re ethnicity you could say that your focus is on the problems with cyber bullying in the UK and because the cast available were white British we focused on this demographic.
Some intelligent comments and well organised. I suggest you look at the feedback I gave you on your 1st draft and see if you can incorporate any points I've suggested into this response.
At present Level 3 (Bish grade) but with tighter examples I've suggested your grade would be strengthened.
Draft 2 Question 2:
ReplyDeleteWell done for researching problems with cyber bullying this greatly strengthens your response.
Re ethnicity you could say that your focus is on the problems with cyber bullying in the UK and because the cast available were white British we focused on this demographic.
Some intelligent comments and well organised. I suggest you look at the feedback I gave you on your 1st draft and see if you can incorporate any points I've suggested into this response.
At present Level 3 (Bish grade) but with tighter examples I've suggested your grade would be strengthened.