Check capital letters please there are some errors re this in the early part of your presentation.
I think it is important to rephrase the area about your early plans for your thriller.
You could say something like.......our initial planning for our opening to a new thriller film was far too ambitious. We wanted to focus on a party and....... but this was not possible. .....
Thus I have learned that thriller openings can be quite straight forward as long as you convey generic conventions and suspense.
For example the first 2 minutes of Essex Boys consists of Billy walking into a derelict garage and getting into a car...it is the use of noir lighting and the appearance of Jason through a muddied windscreen that sets the menacing tone. In this example only one location is used.
You could also say that you learned to use flashbacks in your opening which you didn't use in your preliminary task which had a linear narrative.
A good Level 3+ but the addition as explained above would strengthen.
Check capital letters please there are some errors re this in the early part of your presentation.
ReplyDeleteI think it is important to rephrase the area about your early plans for your thriller.
You could say something like.......our initial planning for our opening to a new thriller film was far too ambitious. We wanted to focus on a party and....... but this was not possible. .....
Thus I have learned that thriller openings can be quite straight forward as long as you convey generic conventions and suspense.
For example the first 2 minutes of Essex Boys consists of Billy walking into a derelict garage and getting into a car...it is the use of noir lighting and the appearance of Jason through a muddied windscreen that sets the menacing tone. In this example only one location is used.
You could also say that you learned to use flashbacks in your opening which you didn't use in your preliminary task which had a linear narrative.
A good Level 3+ but the addition as explained above would strengthen.
You are making promising headway Harriet.