1) Re camera angles, give an example of any specific camera angle which has gained confidence. Use screen shots from your film.
2)Sound Track: This has presented difficulties, you could explain why you found this aspect of the film challenging.
3) Adding titles, i.e. name of film company, and actors in order to establish this is the opening to a thriller film.
4) Challenges of making an opening to a film with no conclusion but a teaser to keep the audience watching the film. Think about including a cliff hanger and the decisions you made here, for example the close up of the cyber bully which draws the audience into her situation and build us suspense.
You could use screen shots from your prelim task and compare with screen shots from your thriller opening to indicate your use in the thriller of more sophisticated lighting and locations.
A potential Level 4 response.
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1) Re camera angles, give an example of any specific camera angle which has gained confidence. Use screen shots from your film.
2)Sound Track: This has presented difficulties, you could explain why you found this aspect of the film challenging.
3) Adding titles, i.e. name of film company, and actors in order to establish this is the opening to a thriller film.
4) Challenges of making an opening to a film with no conclusion but a teaser to keep the audience watching the film. Think about including a cliff hanger and the decisions you made here, for example the close up of the cyber bully which draws the audience into her situation and build us suspense.
At present Level 3/4 B/A grade.
You could use screen shots from your prelim task and compare with screen shots from your thriller opening to indicate your use in the thriller of more sophisticated lighting and locations.
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