1) The film was released in 1994 but events take place in 1954-1954. As an intelligent student you may be interested to read about the case https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parker%E2%80%93Hulme_murder_case or just Google the Parker-Hume Murder Case in Christchurch, New Zealand.
2) Slide on characters and profiles, girls are “vulnerable” note line 1 of this section. Correct spelling.
3)Victim : correct spelling
I like the points you’ve made about the purpose of the close ups of the characters’ hands, the connotations of the mud and the way this film challenges generic conventions of female behaviour. Also you have identified Peter Jackson's auteur style of film making by referencing "The Hobbit" meaning you are thinking out of the box.
Level 3 B+ Grade An improvement on your first draft. Well done Harriet.
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2) Slide on characters and profiles, girls are “vulnerable” note line 1 of this section. Correct spelling.
3)Victim : correct spelling
I like the points you’ve made about the purpose of the close ups of the characters’ hands, the connotations of the mud and the way this film challenges generic conventions of female behaviour. Also you have identified Peter Jackson's auteur style of film making by referencing "The Hobbit" meaning you are thinking out of the box.
Level 3 B+ Grade An improvement on your first draft.
Well done Harriet.