1) Use capital letters accurately, for example capital letter for Eve
2) You repeat "begging" when you should instead use beginning! Could you correct.
3) You must include the title of the case study which is "An analysis of how Sergio Leone establishes and develops the thriller genre in the opening to Once Upon a Time in America". If you don't include the title of the case study and root your answer to the question then you tend to wander off the point and lose focus.
Leone establishes genre (and as you explain" with the establishment of Eve as the femme fatale (please correct spelling here).
4) This section of the film is not set in the 1960's but on 5 December 1933, the day prohibition ended. Could you please correct.
I like the way you identify the visual relationship between the colour of the Tiffany lam and Eve's costume.
Strong advice: Always spell check your work before uploading it.
Overall a mainly proficient analysis reflecting developing understanding of the thriller genre.
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ReplyDeleteTo strengthen your grade could you please revise:
ReplyDelete1) Use capital letters accurately, for example capital letter for Eve
2) You repeat "begging" when you should instead use beginning! Could you correct.
3) You must include the title of the case study which is
"An analysis of how Sergio Leone establishes and develops the thriller genre in the opening to Once Upon a Time in America".
If you don't include the title of the case study and root your answer to the question then you tend to wander off the point and lose focus.
Leone establishes genre (and as you explain" with the establishment of Eve as the femme fatale (please correct spelling here).
4) This section of the film is not set in the 1960's but on 5 December 1933, the day prohibition ended. Could you please correct.
I like the way you identify the visual relationship between the colour of the Tiffany lam and Eve's costume.
Strong advice: Always spell check your work before uploading it.
Overall a mainly proficient analysis reflecting developing understanding of the thriller genre.
About Cish grade at present.